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Kiss me senseless


Kiss me senseless. Ten feet away from the street lamp outside your home, the rain coming down in sheets, my fingers white at the knuckles and cold to the touch digging into your throat. Knock me straight off my feet. Just where the shadow of the blood red moon meets the soft earth caked around our ankles. Place your trembling palms on the small of my neck and knead it back to life as a solitary man whistles further down the street. 

Cover me blind. Until I taste nothing but the inside of your lips and feel your white teeth knocking against mine. Talk to me with your thumbs. Tell my body the tales you had to tell yourself to get over me. Crack open that shell you carry inside you and let its sticky sweetness trickle onto me. But not before you tease me a little, and then just a little more. Trace out your lush desires across the breadth of my shoulders and the length of my spine. The same spine that wouldn’t back down even when you hoped I would. Singe me with your tongue. Up and down the sharp bends of my smooth round flesh, around the curves of my lips, under the heaviness of my breasts. 

Kiss me senseless. Kiss me hard. Just as the purple bruises on my thigh turn a pale yellow and the blood rushing to my feet makes a quick detour. Melt into me. Slowly. Tenderly. Beautifully. The way the brilliant silver mercury flashes across a stone cold floor. Give in to me. Selflessly. Ravenously. Expertly. Like a mad hungry wolf baying at the pitch black sky even when the moon is out of sight. Enter me. Fast. Furious. Determined. As a blind man runs through the raging storm inside his mind with nothing but the will to survive. 

Stay with me. Hesitantly. Precariously. Then completely and deliciously. Like the intrepid lover I’ve always wished you could be. 

The Cloudcutter

4 comments:

neena maiya (guyana gyal) said...

And you can write!! Don't let anyone steal your work, CC!

The Cloudcutter said...

Thank you so much for your continued encouragement and support over the years, GG! Means a lot coming from someone I admire so much as a writer. I stepped out of my comfort zone for this one, as I'm not and have never been very good at erotica. I'm not sure if I did a good job but I'm happy with the imagery... I guess it ended up being my focus, as always :-)

neena maiya (guyana gyal) said...

Thank you, CC!! I don't know about me being anything, I doubt myself all the time...all writers, they say, lack confidence, so maybe that's good.

But gee, how I hope you can get out there and be known. I think women everywhere would relate.

I love talking about writing, and you talk with such passion about it. I haven't published like a real-real author as yet...only small pieces here and there. I hope, when you publish, you stay talking to me :-)

I'm busy compiling some of my writing for women. A male writer told me not to underestimate the buying power of women, and their interest in finding books for women.

So...there you go! Go for it!

The Cloudcutter said...

Well GG, take it from me - You ARE a gifted writer with a unique voice. You know the best part about being a writer? You write without thinking about being read or published or becoming famous. You write despite the odds, even when you know how difficult it is to get published. You write because it's the only way you know how to live!

Thank you so much for your wishes, you know the feeling is mutual. I'm not a published author yet, but being in journalism since 1996, I've had my articles published... of course, it's not the same as having one's autonomous and creative writing published. That's a dream that rages on. OF COURSE, I will always talk to you, girl! (You better promise to talk to me as well! ha ha ha)

I'm glad that you're compiling your writing for women, although I'm not comfortable differentiating between male and female readership like that. I think your writing is wonderful and relevant to everyone, why deprive men of something as wonderful as that? Also, one never hears of "men's writing"... it's always considered the default. So why the need for women's writing? Unless it specifically deals with feminine issues but even then I feel everyone should be aware of them. I think if we want to achieve true equality of the sexes we should be looking at ways to be more inclusive. Sorry... just offering my POV :-) But it's always wonderful to dialogue with you. I greatly value our exchanges. More power to you my friend!